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Chapter 6: And the third thing.
-And the third thing.
I told her the third thing.
She stopped writing.
-Rebecca. No.
-It’s the only way to close the loop.
-It’s bait. You’re offering yourself as bait to a man who already had you crippled once.
-He didn’t have me crippled. Garrett did that, badly and on his own initiative. Hale didn’t order the legs. Hale ordered pressure. Garrett panicked and improvised. That’s actually the tell. If Hale had planned the assault, it would have been clean and I’d be dead. He doesn’t know Garrett went off-script until after. Which means right now Hale is furious, because his careful operation got exposed by an idiot with a pry bar. He didn’t want any of this. He wanted me to quietly drop a line of inquiry.
-That doesn’t make him safer. It makes him more motivated to clean up.
-Yes. And a man cleaning up makes mistakes. I’m going to give him something to clean up.
Reyes put her pen down.
-Walk me through it. All the way. And if I think it’ll get you killed, we don’t do it, and I pull rank on the civilian side and have you guarded so tight you can’t go to physical therapy without an escort.
So I walked her through it.
It took six weeks to set up. Six weeks I spent in a hospital bed and then a rehab ward, learning to move again from the knees up while my legs knit back together around their hardware.
Hale came to visit me in the third week.
I’d known he would. A man like that doesn’t avoid the victim. That looks guilty. A man like that shows up with flowers and a card signed by the command staff and sits by the bed and tells the crippled officer how proud he is of her and how justice will be done.
He did exactly that.
He sat in the chair Reyes had sat in. He put a potted orchid on the windowsill. He had aged, I thought, in six weeks. There were lines around his eyes that hadn’t been there before. Good. The pressure was working on him even before I added mine.
-Rebecca. God. Look at you.
-I’ve looked better, sir.
-The things I’ve heard about that night. Voss and those animals. I want you to know, I have personally made sure the full weight of—
-I appreciate that, sir.
-How are you? Really.
I let my face do something I don’t usually let it do. I let it look tired. Beaten. A little bit afraid. It’s not hard to fake tired when you haven’t slept properly in three weeks and your legs are full of metal. The rest I built on top of the real thing.
-Honestly, sir? I don’t know if I’m coming back from this.
He leaned forward. Concern all over his face. He was good. If I hadn’t seen his name on that account, I’d have believed every ounce of it.
-Don’t say that. You’re the toughest officer I’ve ever commanded.
-The doctors are talking about a medical board. Both legs, the ribs, the. They’re saying even if I heal clean, operational special warfare is probably done for me. And if I can’t do the job, sir, I don’t know that I want to ride a desk for ten years to make twenty.
-You’re thinking about retiring.
-I’m thinking I’m forty-one years old with two legs full of titanium and I almost died on a warehouse floor because four men hated me. I’m thinking maybe I’ve given enough.
He sat back. And I watched it. I watched the thing move behind his eyes, under the concern, in the deep part where he was always calculating. I watched William Hale feel relief.
Brennan’s done. Brennan’s broken. Brennan’s leaving.
The threat was neutralizing itself.
-Whatever you decide, I’ll support it. You know that.
-I know, sir. It means a lot.
He stayed another ten minutes. He talked about my replacement, casually, testing whether I’d flinch at the idea of someone taking the depot. I didn’t flinch. I told him I hoped they’d be as careful as I’d tried to be. He said no one could replace me. He stood, he squeezed my shoulder, he left.
The orchid stayed on the windowsill for the rest of my time there. I kept it alive out of spite. I wanted it blooming when the whole thing came down.
Here is what I had learned from the visit, the thing I couldn’t have gotten any other way: Hale still didn’t know his name was on the board. He’d come to confirm the threat was dying, and he’d left believing it was. He was relaxed in exactly the way a guilty man is relaxed when he thinks he’s gotten away with it.
Which meant there was one loose end that was keeping him awake. One thing a careful man in his position could not leave alone.