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Chapter 8: I didn’t trust my voice for a second.
I didn’t trust my voice for a second.
-Thank you, sir.
-Don’t thank me. Go fix it.
-Yes, sir.
-And Natalie.
-Sir.
-If your father files that IG complaint today, after you’ve given a statement to police identifying him as part of a conspiracy, that’s no longer a family matter. That’s retaliation against a crime victim. Make sure the detective knows he called me.
-Yes, sir.
I stood up and saluted.
He returned it.
I walked out of brigade headquarters at 1328.
My phone buzzed in my pocket.
Brooks.
-Captain. Dana Pruitt just confessed.
I stopped on the sidewalk.
-All of it?
-Most of it. She cried for ten minutes first. Then she pulled out her notary journal and showed us the entry for May fourteenth.
-What does it say?
-Signer: Natalie R. Callahan. Identification: Military CAC card, presented by mother. Notes: signer overseas, documents previously executed, notarized at family request per E. Callahan.
-Per E. Callahan.
-She wrote it down. She thought she was being careful. She said your mother told her you’d signed the papers in Iraq and sent them home in a care package, and that since your mother had your old ID card, it was just a formality. She said Evelyn told her it was common for military families. She said she did it because Evelyn was her friend for twenty years.
-My old ID card.
-Expired CAC. Your mother had a photocopy. Dana made a copy for her file. It’s in her journal.
I closed my eyes.
My old CAC had expired in January. I’d gotten a new one before I deployed. I’d left the old one in a drawer in the kitchen.
-Is Dana going to testify?
-She’s going to do whatever we ask. She’s terrified. She thinks she’s going to lose her commission and go to prison.
-Will she?
-She’ll lose her commission. Prison is up to the DA. Depends on how much she helps.
-Detective. My father called my brigade commander at 0740 this morning. Before I’d told anyone anything. He said I was having post-deployment stress and making erratic decisions. He’s filing an IG complaint this afternoon.
Brooks was quiet for a moment.
-Your father called your commander to discredit you before you could report the crime.
-Yes.
-Write that down. Exactly. Times. Words. Send it to me.
-Already doing it.
-Captain, I want to be at that title company at four.
-So do I.
-Morales says you want to go in person.
-Yes.
-Why?
I looked across the parade field. A company was forming up for afternoon PT. Somebody was yelling cadence.
-Because they’re going to bring the paperwork. All of it. The transfer deed. The trust papers they think they need. The refinance documents. Vance’s been in Nashville all morning at a bank. And because in that room, my mother is going to look me in the eye and tell me I’m confused.
-And you want to see her do it.
-I want everyone in that room to see her do it.
Brooks didn’t answer right away.
-If you go in, you don’t sign anything. You don’t touch any document except to hand it to me. And when I tell you to stop talking, you stop.
-Yes, ma’am.
-I’m not a ma’am. I’m a sergeant.
-Yes, Sergeant.
She almost laughed.
-See you at three-thirty. Riverside Title. I’ll be in the back office.
At 1442, Dalton called.
-The chancellor signed it.
I was sitting in my car in the JAG parking lot. I put my forehead against the steering wheel.
-Say it again.
-Temporary restraining order. Signed 2:31 p.m. Chancellor Whitley. The trustee’s sale on Thursday is enjoined pending a hearing. Cumberland Bridge has been served by email and fax. Their lawyer already called me. He’s very unhappy. He said his client had no idea.
-Do you believe him?
-I believe he’s going to have a long conversation with his title insurance carrier. The deed of trust has a forged signature and a fraudulent notarization. No court in Tennessee is going to let them foreclose on it.
-The house is safe.
-The house is safe from Thursday. The rest takes longer. But yes. For now, the house is safe.
I sat in the car for a long time after he hung up.
Then I drove back to the house to get my mother’s letters.
Chloe was in the kitchen when I came in. Dressed now. Jeans and a sweater. Her face was pale but composed.
She’d talked to Brooks for an hour on the phone.
-Vance just texted. He’s on the way back from Nashville. He says the bank approved the refi. Conditional on the transfer today.
-Mom?
-She texted me twice. She wants me at the title company at three-forty-five. She says to wear something nice. She says it’s a special day.